Your business really isn’t that dull.
When you sit down to write about your business, there is always a temptation to reel off a few historical but mundane facts about your business. It is probably your primary school English teacher’s fault. She succeeded in drumming a linear narrative of beginning-middle-end into your head.
Unfortunately, online reading habits mean that if you haven’t grabbed your potential customer in those first couple of sentences you have probably lost them for good. You need your opening salvo to leave your reader in no doubt as to why they want your product or service.
The uninitiated will often ask a copywriter: ‘Why should I get you to write about what my business? Nobody knows more about my business than me.’
That’s true, but it’s not just about knowledge. It is just as important to pick out the key facts and present them in a way that hooks your target audience.
For instance, imagine Steve Jobs decides to overhaul the Apple website. He is really watching the pennies, or cents, so he decides he will undertake the copywriting himself and starts writing about his business:
“Founded in 1976, Apple is a computer hardware manufacturer based in California.
“We specialise in supplying well-designed desktop and portable devices to a global audience.”
A silly example, but hopefully it illustrates my point. It is factually correct and details exactly what the company does. But you and I know that it is only half the story and is a massive undersell of some of Apple’s key values and selling points.
You need to think about the first impression you want to leave on visitors to your website. What are the most interesting or exciting things about your company? And – here’s the important bit – that means interesting or exciting to your potential customers, not to you or your employees.
If you would like more input from Voz on your website content, we are currently offering free copywriting to one lucky business website.